[Epub] ↠ Mate Me [If You May] (The Millennium Wolves, #0.5) Author Sapir Englard – Writerscompany.co.uk
God himself could not do enough to get me to read the rest of this series, or the rest of this author s work The spelling and grammar were terrible, I have to assume this was written with her eyes closed, and spell check off there is no feasible way auto correct even on an iPhone wouldn t catch at least some of these errors The plot can be summed up in one word rushed They meet, almost immediately he bites her, then they re dry humping and she hates him, but then she loves him, then bam they re mated story over all other subplots are forgotten Her constant angst about having sex with him One session of dry humping and it doesn t matter Her worry over her dead friend Emily One trip on a Ferris wheel, and one panty dropping look and it doesn t matter The whole big to do about the millennium wolves showing up She runs off and has a cry about her relationship it doesn t matter There are not enough words to describe exactly how bad the sex scenes are The words used to describe the characters anatomy constantly change from dick to cock, and pussy to cunt making each sex scene jarring Not to mention the moment where the word boob is actually used, in the middle of a sex scene, in a book, for adults Yeah When the two lovers finally do have sex we get treated to him just ramming it right in there, and in the heat of the moment she describes him as going so deep she can feel him touching her womb But to top it all off, almost every sex scene reads a bit like sexual assault as she always tells him to stop and get off her her, and some even have her crying But wait there s The book doesn t just stop at hints of sexual assault, it actually gives us an attempted rape scene which serves no actual purpose other than to push forward the romance It happens, she s saved half way through, she has a cry about it and then the next day is fine, it s never brought up, or discussed again except for her to think how great of a guy her lover is because he saved her from it But wait there s Get ready for some casual racism as the main character describes any POC she comes across Like someone s girlfriend she describes as being black, short and round, with wild dark locks and big, dark eyes She was the ultimate African American mama bear Not to mention to moments of casual ableism and slut shaming Overall this book is a garbage fire, and there is no amount of post release editing in the world that could save it. Cute, quick read kept me entertained on my flight Yes there was issues with grammar etc but let s not forget 50 shades of grey before we start complaining Well I try to read this story to be honest I like it so I upload the Galatea app But I hate it to have to wait every time before you can read a new episode And to buy the point and read with them is for my opinion very very expensive I prefer to read a story all at once and just buy a book or a epub book so I can read it when I want not very very small parts every day Sorry not for me this expensive Galetea app I feel sad that this writer had it done this way and not by a normal publisher. Nice quick read in one sitting, great characters and HEA, grammar etc needs work but since it s self published on inkitt I m not going to criticise too much, but nice story. I LOVE IT I love the strong female lead and how dominant she is plus the whole romance story. Good, not very long, and hard to find, it s wasn t on when I looke for it , but worth the time it took to find it. Bad bad bad You can t even call this book an easy read, because is not, there are chances to loose some neurons instead In the first places, the story could be interesting if it wasn t for the dialogues and Sienna s thoughts, the way she puts things together was so puerile There was some interesting ideas, but the author doesn t elaborate them, so they remain suspended in abyss I tried to find the entire book to buy, but the only place you can read it is on Galatea And you can read only a chapter day, or you can buy some points and continue reading So this way I paid 25 to read the first part imagine the stupidity I told you, at the beginning, that you can loose some neurons that s my prove , this book would actually cost 2 3 , but the author thought a better way to sell it to the audience this thing makes me really mad and speaks a lot about her interest Shame on her Pity on us The first book wasnt written well at all There were tons of grammatical errors it was hard to read, but I did enjoy the story, so I kept on But I can tell you I ve officially given up The fact that it s on the galatea app, is frustrating The background music is unnecessary, you can only read one chapter a day, or pay double that the book is worth in point to read Why not just get your book actually published It would also be nice if it was removed from ads for other apps like inkitt, so people dont download the app to be vastly disappointed when they realized that it has gone to galatea too. During The Mating Season, Every Werewolf Must Find A Partner To Help Relieving The Sex Craze, Aka The Haze Since All Werewolves Who Re Sixteen And Onward Have Sex During The Season, It Is Widely Regarded As A Social Code Not Sienna Mercer Nineteen And Very Much A Werewolf, Sienna Prefers The Human Way Of Waiting For The Right Guy, Or In Her Case Her Future Mate, Even If It Means Suffering A Great Deal Of Sexual Torture During The Mating Season But The Season Isn T Called Mating For Nothing, For The Stakes Of Meeting Your Mate Throughout The Season Are Much Higher Than Usual, And With The Season In Full Swing And A Certain Alpha S Contemplative Interest, Sienna Finds That, Most Likely, This Season She Ll Be Virgin No Ok let s be honest the app you have to read it on sucks Having to wait till the next day is not fun but also the fact that they charge to get to the next chapter it ridiculous Not only that the having to tap the screen to continue with the story sucks Next the story line is not bad but i feel like it would only be like 20 pages in a normal book It seems unfinished rushed and there is no in depth details It jumps around a lot so you kinda feel lost or that you forgot to read something In my opinion the writer needs to go back to release it when it s done.Might not read anything else but who knows, I personally hate leaving a book unfinished.